Thanks to those of you who participated in answering the question for Chapter 4 of Write A Novel With Me. There were three great answers this week, which I look forward to diving into. As you consider these two great choices, make sure to take into account the story thus far and where you would like to see it go. Check out Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3 and Chapter 4 if you haven’t yet read them (or would like to reread them before making your decision).
Here was the question:
WHERE DID THE SHADOW TAKE RICK?
Here are the answers up for your vote (in order of submission):
1) Rick fell unconscious when the shadow enveloped him, and when he awoke he was in what appeared to be a hospital room with six other people. They helped him up and they all told of their stories of how they got there.
2) The shadows whisked Rick away to a dark tumultuous red and black forest-like place. The twisted black trees seemed to cry crimson as they flew through as if it was just a visit. But the Black Forest kept crying, yearning for any “human” contact, whispering, “Help us. Help us!” The shadows told Rick, “This is your first test.”
3) The shadows kept a close eye on Rick as they traveled through several wormholes. They didn’t want Rick to find his way back too soon. After the shadows made it to their great castle, they threw Rick into a room. Rick woke up, to him it only felt like 24 hours went by but he had traveled many light years away. Rick looked around at his new home and found out that he was not alone. One shadow told him to prepare himself for his first challenge…
To vote, use the comment section below, comment on the Facebook post, or use #WriteANovelWithMe on Twitter (and tag @phoenixmoirai) to provide the number of the answer you like the best. You have until 5 p.m. PST on Monday, November 17, 2014. The winning answer will be the basis for Chapter 5. In case of a tie, I will be the deciding vote.
I look forward to seeing which direction you’d all like to see the story go, and can’t wait to get started on the next chapter.
#1 by Linda Caron on November 14, 2014 - 6:46 pm
I like number 1 the best.